Rephrase this paragraph in your own words. Due tomorrow.

January's Cass School summer carnival has activities for everyone. Activities include playing beanbag toss, fish pond, shoe scrambles, and relay races. Each activity gives exciting prizes like yo-yos, bug-eyed glasses, and light-up pens. The best activity is the clown contest, where students imitate clowns with old clothes, face paint, wigs, big clunky shoes, and wild ties. It's very worth the time to visit the Cass School summer carnival for its activities.

faulty parallelism is a grammar construction where there is no balance in the parts of a sentence they have a similar meaning but the grammar structure is not equivalent.

the correct version of this faulty parallelism in the sentence is:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation's third president.

the problem with the first version is that the sentence:

"jefferson was both the writer of the declaration of independence"

presents jefferson as both a subject and an agent for the verb "write" because if he was "the writer" then the declaration of independence was written by him, besides that fact, the sentence presents a dependent clause.

while the second sentence:

he was the nation's third president.

presents a basic subject+verb+object structure

so, to give a proper balance to the structure, or better said, to give a parallel structure, we must write a basic s+v+o structure in both sentences:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation third president.