The annual 5K Shelter Buddies Fun Run was held again this year to raise funds for the county animal shelter, which is marking its third straight year in a row for finding
adopting families for all animals brought to or left at the shelter.
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The 5K Shelter Buddies Fun Run was held again to raise funds for the county animal shelter,
which is marking its third year for finding adopting families for all animals brought to the
shelter
The annual 5K Shelter Buddies Fun Run was held again this year to raise funds for the county
animal shelter, which is marking its third straight year for finding adopting families for all
shelter animals.
The 5K Shelter Buddies Fun Run was held again this year to raise funds for the county animal
shelter, which is marking its third year in a row for finding adopting families for all animals
brought to or left at the shelter.
O The annual 5K Shelter Buddies Fun Run was held again this year to raise funds for the county
animal shelter, which is marking its third straight year in a row for finding adopting families for
all animals at the shelter.
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