Read the paragraph. (1) Beekeepers began reporting devastating bee losses beginning in 2006—sometimes as much as 90 percent of their hives! (2) Most of the bees were gone. (3) This phenomenon is called Colony Collapse Disorder, or CCD. (4) Scientists remain unsure of what causes CCD, but they know that it has happened before. (5) Reports of disappearing bees date from the 1800s.
Which revision would make the paragraph more precise?
A. Sentence 2: Change “were gone” to “had simply vanished.”
B. Sentence 3: Change “phenomenon” to “thing.”
C. Sentence 4: Change “remain” to “continue to be.”
D. Sentence 5: Change “date from” to “come from as far back as.”

your multimedia presentation should meet the following specifications: • it should be a minimum of four written paragraphs in length, which includes an introduction that previews the topic, incorporates facts, definitions, quotations, or other important information. • it should address all of the questions assigned in the webquest. • it should use vocabulary specific to the topic. • it should include a works cited page to document all sources. • it should reflect mastery of the basic rules of grammar, punctuation, and spelling. • it should use formatting, multimedia, and graphics to reinforce and extend the content. • it should include three multimedia elements and should use at least two of the following types of multimedia: 1. photographs 2. video clips 3. audio clips 4. maps 5. charts 6. graphs 7. works of art (such as original songs, sculptures, painting, performances) • it should be presented in one of the following formats: 1. word document 2. powerpoint presentation 3. prezi presentation can i have points idk the answer

technical documents should be clear and precise. basically, clarity is the key element in a successful technical document.

i think she wanted to protect her children from the extreme racism of the american south.