Write a body paragraph for an explanatory essay that supports the claim and uses academic writing throughout
Your assignment should include the following elements:
• Evidence from "The Chrysanthemums" to support the claim you were given
• An objective tone, free of obvious opinions and bias, and a formal style
• Effective use of language, such as parallel structure, varied phrases and clauses, and efficient
adjustment of parts of speech

the illustration   that would give a reader a clear understanding of the text is a picture of men constructing the frame of a building.the frame is made of iron bars. the text describes the job of blacksmiths'. these were very organised and they had different names: "the driver" and "the heater". the text describes the way in which these men worked ; they worked iron pieces as if they were playing a sport. in fact, the text wants to show the men's skills. the text also puts some emphasis on the use of '' rivets'' in construction. this kind of nails were not always used in the construction of manhattan.

some examples:

"and with an underhand toss he hurled the smoking rivet straight at the catcher, who caught it in mid-air in his catching can." men's skills

"when the driver was ready for a new " the emphasis on the rivet ( special nail used in construction).

" it against a beam to remove any cinders, and jammed it into the waiting hole. " the emphasis on the rivet.

what is this from, i cant tell what language he uses without the piece of literature

determined and defiant is your answer : )