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I chose the prompt: three goals for the school year

Explanation:

This year I want to become a better student, I have written down three goals to help me achieve this. My first goal is to study, even when I don't think I need to. this will help me prepare for tests and get me a better grade. My next goal is to not go so hard on myself. Although school is important, it is also important to take breaks. breaks are essential to doing well. my last goal is to have fun this year while completing all of my assignments. This kinda goes with my second goal, but it is important to enjoy what you are learning. the more fun a lesson is, the more it sticks into your brain

Tip:

Remember, a paragraph contains 5-8 sentences. Therefore, we would need a total of 25-40 sentences.

Topic:

4. Three goals for the school year...

Paragraph(s):

  I have three goals that I would like to accomplish this school year. These goals will help me become successful this school year. One goal I would like to accomplish is to have at least all A's and B's this year. A second goal is to improve my GPA by the end of the school year. For my third goal, I would like to have perfect attendance this school year.

  First of all, a way to accomplish my first goal, I need to study hard for all tests and exams. I would need to take notes and turn in all assignments and homework(s). I would also need to focus during lessons. For this would be a start on reaching my goal of getting at least all A's and B's.

  Second, in order to improve my GPA, I would need to complete my first goal. I would need to be successful in getting high scores on test and quizzes. If I do this, it could possibly bring my GPA up at least 0.3 points. That truly is a big improvement, a big start. The reason I would like to have a high GPA, is because I would be able to receive scholarships and better schools. This could help me throughout life, and help me get a better job in the future.

  Third, I would like to have perfect attendance by the end of this school year. This is because colleges love to see participation. They also love to see improvements. Without missing a day of school, I won't miss a day of learning. This could also help me be caught up with all the work. In order to have perfect attendance in school, I need to have a stabilized schedule.

  To conclude, having all of these done will help me achieve my goals. I would be excited and happy. For my goals are to have all A's and B's, a higher GPA, and perfect attendance all by the end of the year. I could also make this a habit to become the "almost perfect" student. For nobody is perfect, not you, not me, not anyone. It is still best to try though.

Completion:

27 sentences

5 paragraphs

Topic #4

both the address and the poster use diction to convey their message. diction is defined as a style of writing or speaking based on the types of words chosen in order to send a message. parallelism is when a similar sentence structure is used for several sentences on a text; roosevelt's address doesn't follow that. repetition has to do with repeating a word or sentence in order to emphasize and idea, however neither the poster nor the address use repetion. finally, the address doesn't use images to convey a message.

what are the phrases to choose from?