Read the first sentences in Dorthea’s personal narrative. 1. Jamie and Jeremy are my next door neighbors. 2. They are brother and sister. 3. Everyday, myself walks to school with them.

What problem needs to be fixed in Dorthea’s narrative?

hi,   i believe the outlines that were supposed to be showing at the sentences, are not. could you highlight them somehow?

they both lost a woman they loved named lenore

they believed they interracted with a talking raven

they became orphaned at a young age.

21 balloons is the story of professor william sherman's travels.

in 1883, he set off from san francisco for a balloon ride over the pacific and was found a month later floating with 21 balloons in the atlantic ocean. this seemed an astounding feat and everyone wanted to know what had happened.    

professor sherman was loyal, however, and said he would tell his tale first to the western american explorers club in san francisco, of which he was a member. this built up suspense for several chapters before he began to tell of the wonders of his adventures and the amazing island of krakatoa, an island which had just been blown up by a volcano.  

the residents of krakatoa are all millionaires who live under a "gourmet government" of their own devising. we get to see all the incredible adventures that creative people with unlimited resources would create according to the author.

intelligent is the best word to describe ivan markovitch.