5 Reread these sentences from the passage. As he walked, Jake tried to come up with a strategy, a way to remind Joel
about the loan without seeming too pushy. Jake remembered participating in
role-playing exercises at school where students pretended to be someone else
to better see another person's point of view. While Jake waited for the traffic
light to turn red, he thought about how he might start a conversation with
Joel about the borrowed money, and how Joel might respond.
Underline two transitional phrases in this section.

faulty parallelism is a construction in which two or more parts of a sentence are equivalent in meaning but not grammatically similar in form.

the correct version of this faulty parallelism in the sentence is:

the hikers knew that the hike was six miles, that it usually required the entire day, and it would not be wise to start after 10: 00 a.m.

the problem is the last sentence, the first two have a basic subject+verb+object structure.

so, to give a proper balance to the structure, or better said, to give a parallel structure, we must write a basic s+v+o structure in all three sentences:

the hikers knew that the hike was six miles, that it usually required the entire day, and it would not be wise to start after 10: 00 a.m.

major league baseball

explanation:

jack roosevelt robinson broke the color barrier in major league baseball.as he was the first african american to play in the major leagues, jackie robinson became the target of racial abuse. jackie robinson is referring to the historic event, harlem riot.