Read the passage, and think about how the writer expresses his ideas and attitude to motivate a young
audience.
Which words help you understand what the author is
encouraging kids to do?
How would you describe the tone?
Why are the word choice and tone appropriate for this
audience?

she was killed in her home during hurricane katrina. b.she was relocated to another town after hurricane katrina. c.she died trying to get victims of the hurricane to safety. d.she is still missing — police do not know where she is.

the answer should be:

the intervention of the supernatural gives gilgamesh hope that he will defeat humbaba.

hmm, sadly there is no dialogue. there is no place in the story where he is talking to anyone. it's more of just describing what he eats and where he sleeps. you have to become anne frank, give details of where you are, what other folks look like, how the environment is. have a little bit of dialogue tell of what people are specifically saying. anne frank talked about her entire household including the people, the objects, the lighting, the food they ate, and even the smell in the air. there has to be more to your diary entries, the whole story in its current state is only about peter van daan, the food, the sounds, and where he sleeps. also he seems to be writing only once a year yet more than that happened from day to day. for a friend, i can you write it out, if you want.

the speaker versus the boy.