Please help me! Write a poem or short short story that deliberately breaks the rules of Standard Written English. Then, write the piece following standard conventions. Explain what is lost in the standard version or why the departures from standard English helped convey more meaning.

(You may choose to write a nonsense poem in the style of Lewis Carroll or Dr. Seuss, with several made-up words that still carry meaning--or a poem or short short story that uses dialect to create a distinctive voice for the speaker.)

To Elizabeth,

Oh, that I wish for thee to see the things,

That even of King's mightest of knights,

Would scout from slightest turbulence of kinks;

To dight for the journey is hard and rough,

But worry not, for thou knowst my delight

And for that I never prepare with vain

That I do reassure I packed with sense

But dost thou knowst what I do miss the most?

Within thee lies the answer to my cry

And I do hope we soon rejoice in ghosts

To the end of the world, and my death is close.

In standard convention:

To Elizabeth,

Oh, I wish for you to see the things,

That even of the King's bravest knights,

Would run away from the slightest tremor;

To prepare for the journey is hard and rough,

But don't worry, for you know me

And for that I never go without preparation

That I assure you I packed with thoughts

But do you know what I miss the most?

Within you lie the answer to my cry

And I hope we soon rejoice in ghosts

To the end of the world, and my death is close.

In the conventional English version, the sense of separation is reduced a lot more, as if the author's yearning to reunite with his long lost Elizabeth is just now wanting to meet her again and move on. In the old version, however, the dramatic words add more depths and emotions into the piece of writing, as if the author just doesn't have the patience to show and tell Elizabeth of all the things he had witnessed in life.

the police rob enrique and other migrants and they deport them back

i have learned a great many things from participating in varsity football. it has changed my entire outlook on and attitude toward life. before my freshman year at [high-school], i was shy, had low self-esteem and turned away from seemingly impossible challenges. football has altered all of these qualities. on the first day of freshman practice, the team warmed up with a game of touch football. the players were split up and the game began. however, during the game, i noticed that i didn't run as hard as i could, nor did i try to evade my defender and get open. the fact of the matter is that i really did not want to be thrown the ball. i didn't want to be the one at fault if i dropped the ball and the play didn't succeed. i did not want the responsibility of the team because i was too afraid of making a mistake. that aspect of my character led the first years of my high school life. i refrained from asking questions in class, afraid they might be considered too stupid or dumb by my classmates. all the while, i went to practice and everyday, i went home physically and mentally exhausted.

yet my apprehension prevailed as i continued to fear getting put in the game in case another player was injured. i was still afraid of making mistakes and getting blamed by screaming coaches and angry teammates. sometimes these fears came true. during my sophomore season, my position at backup guard led me to play in the varsity games on many occasions. on such occasions, i often made mistakes. most of the time the mistakes were not significant; they rarely changed the outcome of a play. yet i received a thorough verbal lashing at practice for the mistakes i had made. these occurrences only compounded my fears of playing. however, i did not always make mistakes. sometimes i made great plays, for which i was congratulated. now, as i dawn on my senior year of football and am faced with two starting positions, i feel like a changed person.

over the years, playing football has taught me what it takes to succeed. from months of tough practices, i have gained a hard work ethic. from my coaches and fellow teammates, i have learned to work well with others in a group, as it is necessary to cooperate with teammates on the playing field. but most important, i have also gained self-confidence. if i fail, it doesn't matter if they mock or ridicule me; i'll just try again and do it better. i realize that it is necessary to risk failure in order to gain success. the coaches have always said before games that nothing is impossible; i know that now. now, i welcome the challenge. whether i succeed or fail is irrelevant; it is only important that i have tried and tested myself.

the topic of this essay is how the applicant has matured and changed since his freshman year. he focuses on football. one of the strengths of this essay is that it is well organized. the applicant clearly put time into the structure and planning of this essay. he uses the platform of football to discuss and demonstrate his personal growth and development through the high school years. what he could have done better was spend more time describing himself after he made improvements. as it is, he only tells us about his newfound confidence and drive. this essay would have been stronger had he actually shown us, perhaps by including a story or describing an event where his confidence made a difference

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