What changes needs to be made in sentence 6?(reproduced below) to make the sentence grammatically correct?

In 12 angry men the jurors decide that the women could see as far as she could

The basketball crashed against the backboard, and point guard sheena lunged for it. as she snatched the ball out of mid-air, the crowd cheered, chanting encouragement for her team, the monarchs. so far, the game had been a disaster. with 15 seconds left to go in the final quarter, the monarchs were 2 points shy of victory. what main idea do the details in the passage suggest? the point guard sheena was not a very good player. the monarchs had never lost a basketball game. the monarchs were worried about losing. the crowd was not supporting the monarchs.

Ineed writing a persuasive essay about why parents should vaccinate their kids