English, 26.07.2021 04:40, zamirkid7337

Read the sentence. After school, Robbie likes to play video games, and when Robbie is playing video games after school, he likes to have a snack. Which revision corrects the wordiness and redundancy in the sentence? After school, while Robbie is playing video games, he also likes to have something to eat, like a snack. After school, Robbie likes to play video games and have a snack. After school, Robbie likes to play video games and at the same time he is playing he likes to have a snack. After school, Robbie likes to play video games and while he is playing video games he likes to have a snack.

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