Write TWO paragraphs (at least 100 words) to support the idea that leisure time is important. Below are some suggested topic sentences: 1. Leisure time can improve people’s physical wellness.
2. Leisure time is good for people’s mental health.

Leisure means an activity or premeditated inactivity that acts on one's will. As a deeper psychological concept, leisure refers to aesthetic and spiritual experiences produced by this activity. It is different from work, which is done for the purpose of earning money or meeting the immediate needs of life. And yet, it differs from other daily routines, such as food, sleep, household, etc. The special feature of leisure is not the activity itself, but the mood with which it is done.

In turn, leisure is an important part of the well-being of individuals, as it allows them to be distracted from their daily activities, which contributes to their mental and emotional well-being, by allowing them temporary escapes from their jobs and family activities. In addition, while these activities often involve games, sports or physical exercise, they also contribute to the well-being and physical health of individuals.

the letter score 3 in structure because, the letter includes some requirements for a business letter.

the letter scored 1 in tone because,  the tone and vocabulary are threatening and negative. the request is unreasonable.