13. Read this paragraph. (1) Bench-pressing, barbell-squatting, running sprints, doing ab crunches, and playing
basketball, the gym is where Khalid loves to burn energy. (2) On Mondays, Wednesdays,
and Fridays, he exercises one upper body muscle group, which includes the following
muscles: pectorals, triceps, and deltoids. (3) On Tuesdays, Thursdays, and Saturdays, he
exercises biceps, latissimus dorsi, and forearms, which comprise the other upper body
Which sentence contains an error in its construction and should be revised?
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No paragraph in any essay will have this many errors. All of them are not proper sentences.

If you need help revising them I can?

a rough draft essay is the final form of an essay after it has been edited and polished.

halloween: it’s my favorite holiday

halloween is one of the best holidays for some people but it can also be scary for others. halloween is a holiday where some people believe spirits and soul of the dead that haven’t moved on will come back again to haunt the lives of the living. this is why many people dress up in costumes to disguise themselves as someone else. some people like us wish to be something that we would benefit in life from. like angels of god. some dress up just to be unique from the others. many families stay home and watch scary movies and others dress in their tremendous costumes and knock on each door to either get a trick or a treat.

personally everybody loves halloween because i could be someone else one day out of the year. it’s fun and entertaining, especially for kids. halloween also has a lot of history. many myths and beliefs say that witches and warlocks are alive and living among us. is this a trick or a truthful treat?

halloween may have secrets and scary things behind the door but we love halloween and it is beautiful to see how happy children are when each door opens full of treats and goodies. it makes everyone happy. happy halloween day.

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