English, 22.06.2021 14:00, quanyacoles124
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Now you will put what you learned into practice. Remember, some ways to improve word choice include:
Use a thesaurus to find synonyms
Use words that are specific, not vague
Stay away from using verbs like: is, was, were, & are
Rewrite the paragraph below to include more descriptive and colorful language that suggests a mood of exuberance or excitement. Specifically, edit this paragraph for word choice. Feel free to use a thesaurus, but try to maintain your own personal voice. For example, don’t use words you wouldn’t normally use. Make sure to edit for errors in conventions before turning it in.
Paragraph to rewrite:
"I had the best day ever. First, I woke up. Then, I got a package in the mail. I opened it. It was the best gift ever. Then, my aunt came over with a birthday cake and presents for the party. All my friends arrived and we had a good time. I’ll always remember this day."
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English, 22.06.2019 03:50, Jana1517
Which sentence contains a participial phrase that is placed correctly? -jose paid for a hamburger scanning the cafeteria for an empty seat -peeling off her winter jacket, sierra settled into the cozy armchair. -made of soft wool, nadia pulled on a blue sweater -the cowboy jumped from the horse laughing in the face of danger
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