we will examine how different sentence types can add variety and interest to writing. After you have completed this lesson, look through the journal entries that you have written for this unit so far. Analyze your writing to identify areas where you could revise using different sentence types to add interest to your work. Choose three sentences to revise

What does moon shadow think about where the tang people live (text evidence)

Read the sentence. the great wave was inexpensive to purchase, costing only about the same as a double of noodles. since lots of copies could be printed and still look good, it made loads of money. which best revises this sentence to create a more formal style and tone? *the great wave was as cheap as buying a double of noodles. since lots of copies could be made and still look great, people started making piles of money. *the great wave was inexpensive to purchase, costing about the same as a double of noodles. since mass quantities could be produced and still look exquisite, it became highly profitable to sell. *the great wave cost next to nothing, practically the same as a double of noodles. since mass quantities could be produced and still look awesome, it became highly profitable to sell. *the great wave was inexpensive to purchase, similar to buying a double of noodles. since lots of copies could be made that still looked amazing, those who sold it made tons of money.

How does edward covey attempt to break douglass’s spirit?