You'll look at two versions of the same business document. You don't need to read the documents in full. First, look at this original version of the Minnesota Absentee Ballot Instructions for unregistered voters. Then look at the revised
version of the same document.
Compare the original and revised versions of the document. What changes do you think make the revised version better
than the original document? Write your response in 50 to 100 words.

you need to explain that more, your grammer just needs to be close to perfect.

sensory details?

so i`m assuming you are writing something from a bats (the animal) point of view. if this is the case, you can use sights, sounds, feelings, and tastes.

and idk what you mean by domain, but all of the sensory details will depend on where the bat is.

a bat doesn't see color very well, so its surroundings will be dulled.

it can hear super well. so maybe it can hear the insects on the ground

feelings. you can imagine how a bat would feel from its perspective. it all depends on where it lives.

maybe it can taste the salt in the air, or smell water, or something. all of these details are completely dependent on where it is located.

hope this .

- free verse.

- " in poetry, one of the best ways to practice technique is to write in. i want all to be unstressed so that “all the clocks” and “in the night” are matching anapests. many forms that sharpen skills are useful in free verse."