5. How does the author manage to build tension in the opening of the story?? (Paragraphs 1-9) The story called by degrees and Dilatory time on commlit

A by not revealing how the main character previously busted his knee

B. by not revealing the main character's relationship to Zara

C by not revealing why the main character is losing his eyes

D by not revealing if the main character's life is at stake​

mrs. wright was trapped in her marriage, and could not escape it

sorry answered wrong answer

do you have a copy of the poem?

i’m writing a memoir and i’ve been given the great suggestion of placing a ‘sub-narrative’ within some of the chapters – sort of, what was going on with me in the grand scheme of things.

i was wondering how to format this so that it is very obvious we are stepping out the of story.

firstly is a change in font from serif to sans workable? i also use dashes for a scene change. was thinking of using a different scene-changer too.

here’s a (shortened) example:

university – or what’s known as ‘uni’ in australia – were some of the best days of my life. where else do you get to potter around in a great location, have very little responsibility, learn lots of things, do lots of things and walk out four years later with a bonus – a degree!

with my university years i had immersed myself into community of intelligent ambitious people. generally everyone had a confidence about themselves. they knew where they were going in life and weren’t threatened by others.

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next normal paragraph continues here…

(sorry couldn’t show the fonts in this comment field)

too much?