PLS HEL NEED TODA Attached is a prompt. For this assignment, you will write an introductory paragraph and 3 topic sentences for the body paragraphs of this essay.

Assignment must include a hook: 1 sentence minimum
Intro paragraph must include background info: 2 sentences minimum
Intro paragraph must include a thesis statement: 1 sentence
Intro paragraph MUST contain 4 sentences minimum
Three topic sentences must be created
The topic sentences should be organized in the manner that they are listed in the thesis statement
The writer must have a clear central idea
Ideas must be organized logically
Topic sentences must have clear transitions.

Prompt: write an essay explaining how you could make the world a better place.

but in this case just the intro paragraph

answer: we need to see the ads : )

to eliminate ambiguous remote or broad reference it is necessary to focus on anaphoric reference. by definition "anaphoric reference means that a word in a text refers back to other ideas in the text for its meaning." the references should be clear and leave no room for ambiguity.

in the first case the pronoun it probably refers to the car but it has not been mentioned before so we should replace it for the car. in doing so the statement becomes clear.

in sentence number   two   the pronoun he refers to charles dickens the author. yet, the first half of the sentence is about the book a tale of two cities. to repair this it would be better to rephrase the first half : after i read   a tale of two cities by dickens, he so as to remove the remote reference.

a. energy is conserved on earth, but matter is not.