Which revision is needed to correct the following sentence? Weatherby would not allow the scouts into the building nor, would he
call Mr. Slate down to see them.
A. Move the comma to after the word building
B. Add a comma after the word scouts.
C. Move the comma to after the word not
D. Add a comma after the word Slate.

A!

Explanation: I just got it right thanks to the person above me :)

for this, you need to remember something significant in your own life, for example, if you were bullied when you were younger, you can mention your memories on this and touch on how such treatment can harm other kids your age either physically or mentally. (racism, car crashes, a parent in the hospital are all very good subjects, think hard on it! )

hope i ! : )

1.the hosts on two opposing mountains stood,  

2.thick as the foliage of the waving wood;  

3.between them an extensive valley lay,  

4.o'er which the gleaming armour pour'd the day,  

5.when from the camp of the philistine foes,

6. dreadful to view, a mighty warrior rose; in the dire deeds of bleeding battle skill'd,