From “Volunteering Is Vital” by Sharon Goldberg Helping to build a house for an impoverished family gives the volunteer—especially a dedicated one—a greater sense of what it is like to give and to receive. At the same time—volunteers are acquiring life skills, such as the following: learning how to put up drywall; and learning how to operate a power saw. Learning to work as part of the home-building team provides the volunteer with an experience that will most likely be cherished forever. There is a punctuation error in this passage. How can you revise this passage to correct the error? Remove the colon after the word following. Remove the dash after the word time and replace it with a comma. Insert a dash in the last sentence after the words will most likely. Add a dash after the word drywall.

1. the details that would clarify the authors purpose for writing would be after the "haley collected used soccer jersey and sent them to guatemalan children." part, he would say, "and you can also donate today to save ". so far in the text, you can see no such thing. if, near the end the author persuades you to donate to guatemalans, then you know that the author's reason to write is to persuade you.

2. what details would make the text more engaging is to see the guatemalan children's reaction to getting free jerseys.

3. the details that convey the author's attitude would be an opinion by the author, for example, if he said, "haley was a very nice girl " or, you can find the attitude by finding parts of haley's personality that he highlights. you can strengthen your tones by using more descriptive words, and simplify long sentences as much as you can.

you're welcome ; p

well it is hard to say but everyone learns at there own pace  

i learn slow so it would take me like awhile

i hope i was so kinda

and if i was you in would goggle it and watch videos or go to your friends and ask them or maybe even your teacher for extra

the answer is allusion. give me brainliest