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English, 12.05.2021 21:30, gracebuffum

Please help me this is my final exam (1) We are sorry to say that we will not be able to publish your short story "Max versus the Robots" in the school literary magazine. (2) Our editorial board enjoyed the story's creative setting and interesting characters. (3) But the board ultimately decided that the plot was too confusing, and several members had no clue what the deal was with the ending. (4) In addition, some readers were concerned that the technical details about robots would not be of interest to most students. (5) Although we have to reject this story, we hope to publish your work in the future, so please submit a story to us again.
Which option best revises this paragraph to maintain a formal tone throughout?


Please help me this is my final exam

(1) We are sorry to say that we will not be able to publish

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