40 POINTS!! Five paragraph persuasive letter explaining what the schedule at Summerhill (the school) is like and why you would like to stay there or why you wish to leave as soon as possible (one paragraph will help too <33)

because you said "40" points but theres only "15", heres my

type of error:

the error in the sentence is a "dangling modifier". a dangling modifier is a phrase, word or clause that "dangles" because there is not target to modify. in this case, "after mopping the floor" is the dangling modifier since it has no word to modify. the noun "house" cannot mop the floor; therefore there is a mistake in the writing of the sentence.

the correct order is:

you're your own worst enemy:

they're going to say what they say, but

their opinions aren't holding you

back. it's your self-defeatist

attitude that's keeping your work

from getting its due.