English, 05.05.2021 04:40, KingOfLaBron23

Which revision would most improve this excerpt from a narrative Jamie stepped onto the subway that morning just as he did every morning. Nothing seemed unusual, When the robotic voice announced "Humboldt Parkway" he stepped off the subway just as he always did. But as the doors slid closed behind him, Jamie realized that he was not on Humboldt Parkway at all. It was a strange scene. In fact, it was truly bizarre. Unusual creatures walked around an unfamiliar landscape. What was this place?

A. Including a conflict or problem

B. Narrating Events in chronological order

C. Providing clearer details about the setting

D. Explaining where Jamia was trying to go

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