Can u guys help me fix my thesis? This this my thesis : The value of life is determined by who the type of teenagers / adults you are.

And this what he wants me to fix : what type gives value to life? Your thesis has to take a position.

I think you should say "Teens/adults who grew up in a good environment have a better value of life." (or sometimes its vice-versa).

You can also say "Teens/adults who were thought important lessons in life grow up to have a better value of life." (because we learn from those things)

Hope this helps:)

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