English, 04.05.2021 18:50, rhettperkins

Which revision would most improve this excerpt from a narrative? Like many other 12-year-olds, Hannah loved animals. She especially
loved horses. Because her mother taught riding lessons at a nearby
barn, Hannah got to spend a lot of time caring for the horses and riding
them. Hannah considered herself lucky to even borrow other people's
horses, so she was shocked to learn that the man had left her a
beautiful mare, Diamond, in his will. She had never expected to own
her own horse!
O A. Describing the barn in more detail
O B. Explaining how Hannah would care for the horses
C. Including a resolution to the problem
D. Introducing the character who left Hannah the horse

Which revision would most improve this excerpt from a narrative?

Like many other 12-year-olds, Ha

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