PROOFREAD MY ESSAY PLEASE!!! I just ask some of y'all to read this essay and tell me what to fix. The read should not be long and will link it below. Please provide useful commentary applies to the essay. I will give brainleist to the answers that are the most helpful. For reference, I am a sophomore and this is my argumentative essay. Thank You So Much!

Based on the text and the map, which labeled location sends products to shihr? the travels of marco polo and study the map.

The overwhelming majority of the peoples and nations of the world today want to live in peace

How do the soldiers' feelings about macbeth in act i differ from their laterfeelings about him in act v? a. in act i, theymere jealous of his rise to power; in act v, they feelsorry for him and the burdens he bears. b. in act i, they think he is a bully; in act v, they believe he will make agood king if given enough time to rule. c. in act i, they think he is brave and honorable; in act v, they think heis an insane tyrant who must be defeated. d. in act i, they are frightened of his fierceness; in act v, they areafraid of what horrible crimes he will commit next.