1. Choose one of the written texts you composed in this unit to revise to demonstrate your understanding of the conventions emphasized in this activity. If you’re not sure what you could revise in your writing, use success criteria for this task as a starting place and the feedback from your teacher; you might also consider asking him or her for suggestions. Remember, your use of conventions should help make your writing clearer and add emphasis to important ideas. 2. Review other elements of effective writing you’ve studied in this unit: ideas, organization, tone, and sentence fluency. Consider revisions you could make in any of these areas to make your writing more effective.
3. Add presentation elements to your writing to emphasize key ideas and add clarity to your writing.

answer: yes

explanation: he's doug dimmadome, owner of the dimsdale dimmadome

the answers are:

1. dolores driscoll - b. first person minor

dolores is a minor character who happens to be driving the bus at the time of the accident. she narrates picking up each of the children and her last memory is the children being thrown around the bus.

2. billy ansel - a. first person major

billy loses his twins in the accident. he tells his own story, how he witnessed the accident and how he tried to the rescuers. he is a major character, as he is at the center of the story.

3. mitchell stephens - c. first person observer

mitchell enters the story after the accident. he is a lawyer who learns about the accident based on other characters observations. though he tells the story from a first person perspective, he is just an observer.

as for matcthing the message or lesson posted with the person who said them:

1."obviously, you can't control everything, but you are obliged to take care of the few things you can. i'm an optimist basically who acts like a pessimist. on principle. just in case." - dolores driscoll

2. "i could no longer believe even in life. . for me now the only reality was death." - billy ansel

- "in the declaration of independence, it is stated that all people have certain rights that can't be taken away. when the government fails to protect these rights, the people have no choice but to remove that government and replace it with a government that will do its job and protect the people's rights."