English, 30.04.2021 14:00, brummy309506

How is the following sentence improved by the revision? Original sentence: Hester was judged by the community for her sin.
Revision: The community judged Hester for her sin.
improves connotation
deletes repetitive words
uses more descriptive language
removes passive voice and correctly places modifier

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