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1) Introduce the document (title, type, author, date of publication).
This document is an excerpt from the novel Confessions of a Shopaholic, written by Sophie Kinsella, in 2000. It is entitled “I have to have it!”, a title which already suggests the negative side of shopping addiction.
2) Read the text and find out:
a) the subject
The subject is addiction to shop.
Nothing is more naturel than this young girl enjoying discount shopping. However, because she did not know where to start shopping, she has a panic attack. Moreover, she uses the expression “the most beautiful thing I’ve ever seen” for a scarf and thinks that people would call her “the Girl in the Denny and George scarf” when wearing it just because it is a famous brand. These behaviors indicate psychological distress.
The addiction to shopping led the girl to a clear mental problem.
b) the characters
The main character is this “Girl”, the narrator.
A secondary character is the saleswoman who accompanies him throughout.
c) the main character’s personality + justify
The main character is obsessed with shopping. So much so that she prescribes things to absolutely buy for her audience, which are in fact people she does not even know, everyone. This addiction makes her nervous as in the photo. As well as she makes panic attacks, because of the stress.
d) how the saleswoman manages to entice her to buy the scarf / the techniques used
From the reception, the saleswoman is smiling to give good image to the customers.
Then she talks nicely “You always liked this one, I think” for her to buy (because everyone wants to buy what they love).
In addition, she comes to wrap the scarf around her neck to adopt it, make her feel a sense of belonging, of ownership.
Finally, she claims it is the last scarf and suggests that everyone hurry to get that scarf. And in this way, she manages to sell the scarf by egging her on.