English, 01.12.2019 04:31, hixoxo

What is the best way to revise this sentence so that it conveys clear, concise ideas and does not change the meaning of the sentence?

the financial aid advisor spoke to our class yesterday. she said that all qualified students should apply to college.

a) all students should apply to college. the advisor spoke to our class yesterday.
b) the advisor spoke to our class yesterday. all students should apply for college.
c) the financial aid advisor gave us some really good advice when she spoke to our class yesterday.
d) the financial aid advisor, who spoke to our class yesterday, said that all qualified students should apply to college.

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