English, 02.11.2019 06:31, paulonyemakonor549

Which comment is an example constructive feedback
a. the ending of your essay didnt make sense. why dont you add something exciting?
b. no one likes reading essays about dogs. try picking maybe a different topic- maybe something about dating.
c. this section isnt very descriptive. try adding more adjectives to describe your dog or his habits.
d. you didnt choose the right words, so your essay wasnt clear. can you find better ones?

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