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notice the repeated use of commonly used words in the paragraph below. use a thesaurus to improve the maturity of the writing by replacing five words in bold. rewrite the paragraphs. use proper spelling and grammar.

pet ownership can be fun, but it can also be a big responsibility. with each type of pet comes a different responsibility. some pets have fun while taking walks, while others like swimming in water. if you understand your pet, you can have fun for many years to come.

50 ! your poem must include the following: ● poetic form: lines and stanzas (not paragraphs! ) o your poem needs to be at least 10 lines long. ● sensory details/strong imagery o “paint a picture” and/or create an emotion with your words, word choice is key in poetry ● figurative language o include at least one of the following: metaphor, simile, and/or personification (click here for more info. on these) ● sound devices o include at least one of the following: repetition, rhyme, rhythm, meter, onomatopoeia, and/or alliteration (click here for more info. on these) ● labels o underneath your poem, include the words from the poem that represent the figurative language and sound devices and label them o examples: booming bombs - alliteration; like a firefly - simile you so