English, 13.10.2019 15:50, kms275

The rough draft is the final stage of writing before a paper is given to the teacher for grading.

rough drafts do not include facts, examples, and details about the main topic of the paper.

rough drafts consist of an introduction, a body, and a conclusion.

it is a good idea to come up with ideas about a topic after you write your rough draft.

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Actually, as a writer myself, the rough draft is the second step for writing a story. the first step is an outline of what to include in the story. then its your rough draft after the outline. the rough draft is like the paper but you are aware that you will have to go back and change some stuff. the rough rough drafts do include and introduction paragraph a body, and a conclusion paragraph. writing the rough draft before your actual story the better it will be. all writers do that. a rough draft include everything that your original story will have but the draft will be needing some work. so your rough draft is sort of like a few paragraphs having the main points and ideas. you also wrote description, be careful although details are very important you have to keep in mind too much details in one paragraph is going to be too much. for example, i suffer though this as well, imagine you introduced other characters other than the main character, if you describe what they look like in one paragraph, its not going to be interesting for the reader. so you can, perhaps when that character is talking, you can hint in some details about them!!!
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faulty parallelism is a grammar construction where there is no balance in the parts of a sentence they have a similar meaning but the grammar structure is not equivalent.

the correct version of this faulty parallelism in the sentence is:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation's third president.

the problem with the first version is that the sentence:

"jefferson was both the writer of the declaration of independence"

presents jefferson as both a subject and an agent for the verb "write" because if he was "the writer" then the declaration of independence was written by him, besides that fact, the sentence presents a dependent clause.

while the second sentence:

he was the nation's third president.

presents a basic subject+verb+object structure

so, to give a proper balance to the structure, or better said, to give a parallel structure, we must write a basic s+v+o structure in both sentences:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation third president.

answered: Guest

in ray bradbury's short story "a sound of thunder", mr. eckels's fearfulness leads to drastic consequences for the rest of the world.

in the story, mr. eckels, who is a hunter, hires a time travel company to travel to the age of dinosaurs. although he is excited for the hunting expedition at the beginning, when they reach there and mr. eckels sees the tyrannosaurus, he feels frightened. as he is afraid of the tyrannosaurus, he steps off the path although he has been warned not to do it. by stepping off the path, the entire course of the future is affected: mr. eckart alters the future by stepping on a butterfly, which causes a new man to be elected president in the future. in that way, it is mr. eckart's fearfulness what triggers 'the butterfly effect' and what leads to drastic consequences for the rest of the world.