English, 21.11.2019 19:31, Gerber7778

Iwas born in 1992 in chicago. i moved to new york city when i was 12. i published my first story in my school’s literary journal when i was a freshman. i am now the editor of the school newspaper. i want to study journalism when i am in college.

what would be the most effective way to revise this paragraph?

a. avoid beginning each sentence with the pronoun
b. work with a group of peer reviewers
c. change the verb tenses
d. include a summary sentence at the end of the paragraph

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