franklin delano roosevelt (fdr) was born in hyde park, new york. he was the thirty-second president of the united states. he was the only president ever to be elected four times. fdr was the president during the great depression and world war ii. he was the architect of the new deal. the new deal was a domestic program that provided economic relief and significant reforms in industry, finance, and housing. which is the best way to improve this paragraph’s sentence fluency?
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Read the excerpt from "politics and the english language" by george orwell. by this morning’s post i have received a pamphlet dealing with conditions in germany. the author tells me that he "felt impelled” to write it. i open it at random, and here is almost the first sentence that i see: "[the allies] have an opportunity not only of achieving a radical transformation of germany’s social and political structure in such a way as to avoid a nationalistic reaction in germany itself, but at the same time of laying the foundations of a cooperative and unified europe.” which statement is correct? orwell uses an example and statistical evidence in this excerpt. orwell uses an example and a quotation for evidence in this excerpt. orwell uses hypothetical and factual evidence in this excerpt. orwell uses hypothetical and statistical evidence in this excerpt.