Review the scenario.
you write a paragraph containing all simple sentences. your readers complain that the writing sounds overly childlike and choppy.
which is the best method to add variety to the paragraph?
add a couple more simple sentences.
change the simple sentences to compound sentences.
change the simple sentences to complex sentences.
change some of the sentences to compound and complex sentences.
i don't know if this is right but i think the answer is Feldman kept rigorous data on his business. Hope this helped:)
Good luck hun!
you write a paragraph containing all simple sentences. your readers compl...