Review the scenario.
you write a paragraph containing all simple sentences. your readers complain that the writing sounds overly childlike and choppy.
which is the best method to add variety to the paragraph?
add a couple more simple sentences.
change the simple sentences to compound sentences.
change the simple sentences to complex sentences.
change some of the sentences to compound and complex sentences.
Les enfants iront à leurs cours de danse.
2. Eloise et son mari déjeune sur leur terrasse.
Eloise et son mari déjeuneront sur leur terrasse.
3. Tu n’as pas peur, n’est ce pas?
Tu n'auras pas peur n'est ce pas ?
4. Il est minuit.
Il sera minuit.
5. Nous parlons de la fac.
Nous parlerons de la fac.(fac=university)
6. Est-ce que tu fréquentes les musées?
Est-ce que tu fréquenteras les musées ?
It is better to say:
Do you visit museums??(Est ce que tu visites les musées ?)
Est-ce que tu visiteras les musées ?
8. Is going to be\presented
change some sentences to simple and complex sentences
I don't like the way their is no respect in the schools within the Grades
l will also like to change things in the schools like people should stop cheating during examination
l will like to shift the break time it is to early
l will also like for every one to know that it is not only grade around the world ,there is jss ,Secondary and primary
D. If it's too hard to read, then you should shorten some sentences to give the sentence more of a flow.
good morning :) :)
where are the sentences
it might be incomplete :)
have a nice day
The answers are
person against person: the hunger games bookteens were sent to fight against each other. they were sent in groups of two's. but could only be one winner. this conflict gave me a emotion of sadness. it made me feel bad for the kids that was sent there.
the answer is:
d. a story that frightened readers so much they would become suspicious of their surroundings
frankenstein is one of the terror novels wrote by the writers in a sort of bet, lord byron challenged them all to write a ghost story, and the story came to mary shelley in a dream, she wanted to conect with the fears of her society, fears of technology and changes, and she wanted readers to look around, freightened.
mark brainliest and have a great day!
you write a paragraph containing all simple sentences. your readers compl...