Romeo and juliet persuasive essay
i have to persuade someone that if romeo and juliet were actually in love or they were crushing really hard.
can someone read my introduction for my persuasive essay and give feedback:
"real love is when you are completely committed to someone; /real love is not based on romance." romeo and juliet are star-crossed lovers who love each other at first sight and become married the next day. in romeo and juliet, by william shakespeare, two families feud with each other while to teenagers from opposite families fall in love and get married which leads them to die together.

this is what i have so far.

Read the passage below and answer the question that follows. ‘you make me feel uncivilized, daisy,’ i confessed on my second glass of corky but rather impressive claret. ‘can’t you talk about crops or something? ’ i meant nothing in particular by this remark but it was taken up in an unexpected way. ‘civilization’s going to pieces,’ broke out tom violently. ‘i’ve gotten to be a terrible pessimist about things. have you read ‘the rise of the coloured empires’ by this man goddard? ’ ‘why, no,’ i answered, rather surprised by his tone. ‘well, it’s a fine book, and everybody ought to read it. the idea is if we don’t look out the white race will be—will be utterly submerged. it’s all scientific stuff; it’s been proved.’ in this passage, tom’s ideas about race relations come off as uncivilized. what literary device is fitzgerald using here? irony personification metaphor simile