Which revision best eliminates wordiness in the following sentence?

summer jobs can provide teens the values they need to be good workers, such as being responsible.
a. change "good workers" to "good employees."
b. change "being responsible" to "responsibility."
c. change "summer jobs" to "jobs."
d. change "values they need" to "values they should have."

Read the following conclusion for an essay that claims that extreme sports should be more highly regulated because they are too dangerous: whether it is a high level of physical exertion, or extra doses of the "fear factor," it is common for extreme athletes to beat at the door of fate. it is these people who tempt their own mortality, while curious onlookers wait anxiously for the outcome, who must be protected from themselves. which statement provides the most accurate evaluation of the paragraph? a. the closing statement is unsatisfying b. the passage introduces new evidence. c. the thesis is not restated. d. the style is informal and inconsistent.

Which sentence is correctly punctuated? a. i haven’t found a new job, and i don’t plan to look for one until i have to. b. my work is piling up—day to day—and i can’t seem to get caught up. c. i know things could be worse (they have been in the past).

Brainliest asap and 98 points! which word means partially dependent? semi means half in means not inter means between super means over