Ikinda don't like how this poem sounds. is there anything i should change?

fear is a powerful thing
it can change your life
fear can be big
fear can be small
but no matter how big your fear is
it is fear all in all.
what are you afraid of?
what causes you to bristle in fear
tell me, what are the things that scare you?
what causes your hair to stand
fear is a powerful thing

he agrees with the monk's positions.

waves come crashing to grey sullen shores.

powerful and strong, it breathes and roars.

cascading and caressing each grain of sand,

a warm embrace between sea and land.

high above, a seagull soars high.

wings of purity it spreads to fly.

battling high against darkened cloud,

in a wind that blows fiercely, flying graceful and proud.

beneath, the sand is soft and warm.

sculpted by nature, it's weathered the storm.

a passionate battle between calmness and rage,

a new chapter's beginning; don't turn the last page.

i listen again to the whispering waves,

music of nature calming and brave.

its power unknown, its stillness untamed,

mysterious and magical, a treasure earth claims.

plz mark brainliest

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