English, 30.01.2020 20:56, lizatapper5054

Read the passage. what is an effective way to rewrite the passage to avoid redundancy and wordiness? most people, regardless of their age, love the taste of sweet and sugary treats like chocolate, soda, and cookies. these foods are more often than not high in calories because of the sugar content. because of the high sugar content and high calories, such foods can cause people to gain a lot of weight. people of all ages love the taste of sweet and sugary treats like chocolate, soda, and cookies. these sweet and sugary foods are very high in sugar content, which is bad for your health. people love to eat sugary treats like chocolate, soda, and cookies. sugary treats like chocolate, soda, and cookies can lead to an increase in weight. people love sweet treats like chocolate, soda, and cookies. these foods are high in calories due to their sugar content, which can lead to an increase in weight. people love the taste of sweets like chocolate, soda, and cookies at all ages. people who do like these sweets are more likely to gain weight because they eat sweets. this is because these foods contain a lot of sugar and calories.

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