Use temporal transitions to revise the following paragraph. you may need to create additional details or information. use proper spelling and grammar.
ashley wanted a puppy. he talked to his family for hours. they did not believe he had time to care for the puppy. ashley created a puppy-care plan. his family finally agreed.

Ashley wanted a puppy, therefore he talked to his family for hours. However, they did not believe he had time to care for the puppy. Because of that, Ashley created a puppy-care plan. Finally, his family agreed.

Explanation:

Temporal transitions are words or phrases that connect parts of a text or a speech by demonstrating a relationship between them. That relationship can be:

1. Addition: also, another, finally, first, first of all, for one thing, furthermore, in addition etc.

2. Sequence: first, second, next, last, finally, first of all, concurrently, immediately, prior to, then, at that time, at this point etc.

3. Contrast: but, however, in contrast, on the other hand, on the contrary, yet, on the other hand etc.

4. Exception: however, whereas, on the other hand, while, instead, in spite of, yet etc.

5. Comparison: like, likewise, just, in a different way / sense, similarly, just as etc.

6. Illustration: for example, to illustrate, when/where, for instance, such as, in this case  etc.

7. Location: next to, above, below, beneath, left, right, behind, in front, on top, within  etc.

8. Cause and effect: because, therefore, consequently etc.

9. Emphasis:  most of all, the chief factor,most noteworthy, the principal item, above all, should be noted  etc.

10. Summary or conclusion: to summarize, in short, in brief, finally etc.

In the revision above, we used two conclusion transitions, a contrast one, and a cause-and-effect one - therefore and finally, however, and because (of that), respectively.

go to the home screen and it says what do you need to know? then type the

explanation:

it refers to the definition of full-contact sports, where the condition is that the sport must have athletes must "purposely collide with each other