Agood way to check the effectiveness of a paragraph is to
a. read it in reverse, beginning with the last sentence and ending with the first.
b. write a short essay based on the paragraph to see if enough information was presented.
c. create a title for each paragraph as if it were the main essay.
d. write three alternate paragraphs and then choose the best one.

Explanation:

This could help because a paragraph is about a specific idea that support the main one. So, giving little titles to each paragraph will help you to see if each paragraph doesn't have too many ideas, because this can confuse readers.

Just consider that a paragraph is a unit that discuss a single idea.

gilgamesh is an epic hero from birth, as he's brought to the world by the hand of several gods who shaped him with the goal of saving humanity. there's a passage from the text that reads "the glorious sun shamash bestowed upon him glory; adad the terrible god of storms bestowed upon him courage. the great gods perfected his magnificence beyond all others, terrible like the great wild bull". this is a great example that show some of the super-human qualities that the gods gave gilgamesh upon his birth.

as gilgamesh grows he has to face many challenges that put his heroism to task. the courage he displays along the way, prove that he's ready to live up to the godly qualities brought upon him. at one point he has to overcome a wild beast by the name of hubamba "whose roar is a flood, whose mouth is fire, whose breath is death", as the text reads. the actions taken by gilgamesh, beating the beast with the use of his super-human force, examplify why he shoud be thought of as an epic hero.

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a lion king of the jungle he watch's his pray and watch out and go hunting for food and go fight   other animals to protect his cubs from getting hurt