What is wrong with the following example?

the meteorologist predicted rain and cloudy weather for the next week. it was rainy and cloudy so we couldn't go outside as much.

a. too brief
b. repetitious
c. important information isn't first

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(you didn't attach a copy of the poem, but i'm answering as best as i can)

since a simile compares two unlike things using like or as, it kind of gives an item the ability to do something it can't.

example: "the player was like a tiger on the field"

in this sentence, the simile conveys the idea that the player was fast and strong, like a tiger.