Which of these comments would be the MOST helpful in a peer review? "This is a great description because it includes a lot of details and interesting words."
"This is a great description--it gives enough details that I can imagine the way each object looks and feels."
"This is a great description. But you need to add details."
"You need to add transitional tags to your quotes."​

Who is not a member of rome’s second triumvirate?

If you’re looking for a place to visit, i recommend yosemite national park. visiting yosemite has been a high point of my life. can you imagine waking up, inhaling the pine-scented air, and watching the pink-tinted mountains reflect the sunrise? later, as you hike, you’ll encounter meadows strewn with rainbows of wildflowers and lakes in astonishing shades of blue. the tone of the passage is effective because it defines yosemite for the reader. the author entertain the reader. instructs the reader on how to enjoy yosemite. supports the author’s attempt to persuade.

Have you ever read the story about armand well can you me with a question its wich plot element is best represented by this scene