They say your life flashes before your eyes before you die. So imagine this your walking outdoors after a rain, your crossbow at your side. Then you slip down a hill tumbling the whole way down and finally landing against solid ground. All of the sudden you feel a sharp pain in your side, looking towards the pain you see a crossbolt in your side and your bleeding out. Suddenly you see your wife's pretty face, her smooth orange hair blowing in the breeze. Her smiling at you when you walk inside after a long day of farming. Then nothing. The emptiness of death itself. No light at the end of the tunnel. Just pure darkness.

Explanation:

What is this?don't know.But,nice one.The feeling and advent of good vibes.

faulty parallelism is a grammar construction where there is no balance in the parts of a sentence they have a similar meaning but the grammar structure is not equivalent.

the correct version of this faulty parallelism in the sentence is:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation's third president.

the problem with the first version is that the sentence:

"jefferson was both the writer of the declaration of independence"

presents jefferson as both a subject and an agent for the verb "write" because if he was "the writer" then the declaration of independence was written by him, besides that fact, the sentence presents a dependent clause.

while the second sentence:

he was the nation's third president.

presents a basic subject+verb+object structure

so, to give a proper balance to the structure, or better said, to give a parallel structure, we must write a basic s+v+o structure in both sentences:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation third president.

ethos, logos, and pathos.