All right yall so I want you to right a second paragraph for this story Me and my dad michael went out to a lake once to go fishing and he caught some fish, but i wasn't able to catch anything so he told me that i needed to set the hook before i reel back in, He said "when you feel some small tugs and you are sure they are still there then you have to jolt your fishing rod backwards to get the hook stuck inside of the fish's mouth" so I did that and i had caught my very first fish. But there was something I didn’t know and that was that the area me and my dad were fishing in had a mega fish. pleas help 30 POINTS

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Explanation:

The megafish was giant and I was very scared of it. I wondered why did we even come to this place for fishing. I asked my dad to go away from this place but he was so shocked he could not move. A few minutes later my dad was talking to me again not so shocked. I asked him to get out of the place immediately and finally, he said yes. I was very surprised that I saw a megafish. I wondered why, I really wondered

i decided to stay late in the laboratory to continue my experiment with the lightbulb. at midnight, thomas edison opened the door and walked in with his head held high.

1. he leaned on the wall and observed me carefully.

2. his harsh scrutiny made me self-conscious of my skills in the lab.

3. perhaps it was just me, but the air in the laboratory began to thicken as i found myself having difficulty to breathe.

4. i turned to look at him fully as i mentally prepared myself for what my very first words would be to thomas edison.

5. the next couple of seconds shocked me. it wasn't me who spoke, but rather him and with diction i could never think of using in a simple sentence.

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hey, sorry if this was bad, i really didn't know what to write but i wanted to you. is there anything that you had to include within the excerpt?