The sun shone brightly. Fluffy clouds floated in the sky. A soft breeze rustled the leaves. It was a perfect day to relax. Revise the sentence

The sun was shining brilliantly. The sky was filled with fluffy clouds. The leaves were rustled by a gentle wind. It was a great day to relax .

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it u understand what he thought at the time and let u know more about him then what third person would of known probably. hope this : )