2 Question Select the correct answer from each drop-down menu.
Complete the sentences by choosing words that gue the parayjaph a peaceful tone.
Once a month I go to the mountains to get an ay from the hustle and bustle of city life. The fresti, perear a the
mountaintops
my tense state of mind and rehves my tired spine Sometimes it rains
evenings. After the rain stops, the place becomes all the more
and beautiful
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faulty parallelism is a grammar construction where there is no balance in the parts of a sentence they have a similar meaning but the grammar structure is not equivalent.

the correct version of this faulty parallelism in the sentence is:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation's third president.

the problem with the first version is that the sentence:

"jefferson was both the writer of the declaration of independence"

presents jefferson as both a subject and an agent for the verb "write" because if he was "the writer" then the declaration of independence was written by him, besides that fact, the sentence presents a dependent clause.

while the second sentence:

he was the nation's third president.

presents a basic subject+verb+object structure

so, to give a proper balance to the structure, or better said, to give a parallel structure, we must write a basic s+v+o structure in both sentences:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation third president.

they bound logs together and built a raft. enkidu steered it down the great river. gilgamesh carried humbaba's head.