someone come up to with a powerful good name that describes the healing fruit but it turns into a soda. which basically this fruit ends up having side effects which gives you healing powers. and now i have to come up with a good name for it that stands out which now when i add the fruit to the soda it would be called ???SO SOMEONE PLEASE HELP ME OUT. of what the soda should be called when this beauitful power is inserted inside of the soda.
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Here's constructive criticism.
So, I'll start off by saying; sorry if anything I say sounds rude. This is completely constructive and is only being said so you can learn from it.
To begin with, it just seems all over the place. I'm having a hard time telling what exactly this is supposed to be about. Try to organize things when you right, it'll make it easier for your teacher to read.
Secondly, your puncuation needs to be corrected. Go back through and try adding commas and periods (they seem the most neccesary here.)
I would add more because surely it still needs corrections outside of what I listed, but I'll only continue if you want me to. Have a great day!
i feel like its the second to last line/stanza that shows her character development
itssinteresting but i like it.
nice story did. you write it
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sing because that is what they are doing in the sentence
the simple predicate is the main verb in the predicate that tells what the subject does. example: my father fixed the dryer. read each sentence. draw a line under the complete predicate.