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English, 21.03.2021 21:00, dhgdzfbzdf6765

Hello! I need help adding words onto my pandemic memoir, here i am describing one of my memories. it should be minimum 350 and maximum 500 but i only have 126. could u guys help me rephrase or just add something onto my paragraph? also it should contain these 1. opening with a question
2.dialogue
3.in the middle of action
4. description of a person or setting
5. dramatic statement
6.leve the reader with intriguing info.

here is my paragraph:
“Mum, can I go now please?”

“All right, but be careful darling!”

“I will be mum! Don’t worry!”

I heard from behind me, as I accelerated on my skateboard. I felt the cool breeze on my face and as I looked up I could see the serene heavens decorated with just one lucent, blinding golden dot. While exploring the park with my inquisitive eyes I got to see two squirrels ecstatically playing next to the verdant trees. The smell of fresh pastries along with the feeling of freedom sent me to nirvana, however something interrupted my euphoria.

My body's equilibrium was lost at the same time when everything became sluggish.
My body became uncontrollable. As I fell forward my delightful reverie ended.

Blink. Phosphenes. Blood. Flash.

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